tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post4359641550958819861..comments2023-06-04T07:28:04.194-07:00Comments on Fragmented Impressions: Raat Youn Teri (Faiz)-TranslationSadiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16948040699222878015noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-18999937221770129832011-01-06T12:09:36.904-08:002011-01-06T12:09:36.904-08:00hey Aparna
Im a visitor here and no longer the ho...hey Aparna<br /><br />Im a visitor here and no longer the host :) i rarely come here, just once in a while when i feel like looking back.<br />have been reading some of poetry chaikhana stuff lately :)<br />I have posted nothing in Persian. Urdu itself is a handful for me...Sadiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16948040699222878015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-48565482028259015452010-09-19T22:43:57.254-07:002010-09-19T22:43:57.254-07:00Dear Sadia,
I just stumbled upon your blog today, ...Dear Sadia,<br />I just stumbled upon your blog today, over my morning cuppa (poetry-chaikhana) Brilliant work and a warm hug to you.<br />Have you also sometime posted any Persian poetry?? If so, I would love to know which archives to explore.<br />Love and light<br />Aparrna Sharma<br />(Chandigarh)Sonam Aparnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11206054590264346393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-18991123004760864992010-05-18T08:51:33.610-07:002010-05-18T08:51:33.610-07:00Aa, ki tujh bin is tarah, aye dost ghabraata hooN ...Aa, ki tujh bin is tarah, aye dost ghabraata hooN maiN, ki jaise har shayy meiN koi shayy ki kamii paata hooN maiN :)Kumailnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-51752961766948609072010-05-18T08:47:29.408-07:002010-05-18T08:47:29.408-07:00Sadia, like it or not, there are some people who w...Sadia, like it or not, there are some people who wait for your posts. Please indulge them.Kumailnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-6953870191780180852010-05-08T06:46:28.306-07:002010-05-08T06:46:28.306-07:00Just one word! Awesome!Just one word! Awesome!Siddharthnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-31232394482995976522009-12-22T08:32:44.733-08:002009-12-22T08:32:44.733-08:00@wsxwhx602...I'm sure that was very educative,...@wsxwhx602...I'm sure that was very educative, enlightening and productive. Please post a translation too, for us lesser mortals. Unless its an ad for a lifetime supply of invigorating pills, which I have enough of in my spam folder.Kumailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09319349483887459268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-31003571373355305852009-12-19T23:33:33.367-08:002009-12-19T23:33:33.367-08:00Kumail: It is truly a simple and beautiful poem. i...Kumail: It is truly a simple and beautiful poem. in the present context, its "simply" beautiful :)<br /><br />Siyaah: I think here "bevajah" means almost reasonlessly... like when one has experienced lasting pain and in the midst of it he feels suddenly comfortable, perhaps just temporarily... I understand this as that state...Sadiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16948040699222878015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-83865823943393359802009-12-17T14:16:28.643-08:002009-12-17T14:16:28.643-08:00Very nice. I think it did require some interpretiv...Very nice. I think it did require some interpretive translation in places, and you've done it justice. Still thinking about Faiz's use of 'bevajah' in the last line...wonder what he really means...Siyaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09602286491370735800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-57281904048983139032009-12-09T07:25:28.548-08:002009-12-09T07:25:28.548-08:00Love the use of 'simply' w.r.t 'bevaja...Love the use of 'simply' w.r.t 'bevajah'Kumailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09319349483887459268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-46314742424965419982009-12-09T07:23:57.579-08:002009-12-09T07:23:57.579-08:00A beautiful and simple translation of a beautiful ...A beautiful and simple translation of a beautiful and simple thought. You're the bestest, Sadia.Kumailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09319349483887459268noreply@blogger.com