tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post116005235533930762..comments2023-06-04T07:28:04.194-07:00Comments on Fragmented Impressions: GhazalSadiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16948040699222878015noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-42415155783022994112009-10-14T16:37:56.464-07:002009-10-14T16:37:56.464-07:00Truely a lovely work. Looking for more.Truely a lovely work. Looking for more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02831732767122257071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-76166735596758840992007-04-05T23:38:00.000-07:002007-04-05T23:38:00.000-07:00Really marvellous, keep it up. Kaash her koi shair...Really marvellous, keep it up. Kaash her koi shairna thabiyat rakhtha!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13085542057013340691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-66596661453797764432006-11-09T07:20:00.000-08:002006-11-09T07:20:00.000-08:00it's so beautiful.. really touching!!
i thought of...it's so beautiful.. really touching!!<br />i thought of chosing the best couplet.. but couldn't as each one is better than the best!<br /><br />and it's your first attempt at ghazal!! a perfect start up..Vikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09509006520832510932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-41247773962324950532006-10-19T05:39:00.000-07:002006-10-19T05:39:00.000-07:00Microsoft it is :( and moreover its firefox:(, alt...Microsoft it is :( and moreover its firefox:(, although I love firefox, it is giving me trouble. But warpie has come to the rescue and promises to mail me the number :)Sadiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16948040699222878015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-19612544645486627752006-10-18T02:02:00.000-07:002006-10-18T02:02:00.000-07:00Sadia : screw up Microsoft(hoping that u r not on ...Sadia : screw up Microsoft(hoping that u r not on Linux) for something u were denied of :-) coz u hv paid for it.<br /><br />Damn it !!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1161099971667469232006-10-17T08:46:00.000-07:002006-10-17T08:46:00.000-07:00arfi :)warps: what was that :P. yeah warps me glad...arfi :)<BR/>warps: what was that :P. yeah warps me glad at the balance too. only i aint sure my definition of balance is rite.<BR/>amit . glad u like dit :)<BR/>foots: dam i cant hear anything on musicindia sumthing wrong with my forewall setting and i dunno how to change it :(<BR/><BR/>How: waqt ka muqaam hai ya nahi, is debatable, lekin waqt ke pairo.n ke nishaa.n to zaroor hain. jab hum chale, humne dekhe the :)Sadiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16948040699222878015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160865828527296482006-10-14T15:43:00.000-07:002006-10-14T15:43:00.000-07:00Sadia: The words are very nicely arranged. i also ...Sadia: The words are very nicely arranged. i also read the link to rediffblogs from this post, and that is again a well written piece. <BR/><BR/>My only problem with this is that... is mein kuchh aisa nahi hai, jo pehle kabhi nahi suna.. till one reached the last 2 lines.. that was fresh, compared to the thoughts in the earlier verses.. <BR/><BR/>ya shayad, waqt ka kaagaz par muqaam hai??How do we knowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01763488475931737293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160734591329547112006-10-13T03:16:00.000-07:002006-10-13T03:16:00.000-07:00Sadia ...great workThis work of urs reminds me of ...Sadia ...great work<BR/><BR/>This work of urs reminds me of a raaga 'Suddha Sarang'.<BR/><BR/>If u want to listen to the raaga on the flute, go to wwww.musicindiaonline.com and search for 'hariprasad zakir' under Hindustani instrumental.And click on 'Suddha Sarang' to play.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160680310037377862006-10-12T12:11:00.000-07:002006-10-12T12:11:00.000-07:00Wah wah wah...-Amit http://www.ipatrons.comWah wah wah...<BR/><BR/>-Amit<BR/> http://www.ipatrons.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160508470441058582006-10-10T12:27:00.000-07:002006-10-10T12:27:00.000-07:00nice ... very nice indeed! :)nice ... very nice indeed! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160502460920046292006-10-10T10:47:00.000-07:002006-10-10T10:47:00.000-07:00Thanks guys. This has been very encouraging. I'm g...Thanks guys. This has been very encouraging. I'm glad you liked it :)<BR/><BR/>Adnan: I would have been very given to the idea of consulting some people from the urdu shayari scene in Mumbai. However circumstances have had it such that I have been quite quite close to the Urdu literatti so to say and am quite disenchanted with the lot at large. This would impede me i guess.Sadiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16948040699222878015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160498799615941422006-10-10T09:46:00.000-07:002006-10-10T09:46:00.000-07:00I must say I liked the opening theme (matla) more....I must say I liked the opening theme (matla) more...though simple, it was very genuine...<BR/><BR/>Also: nice choice of words/theme for the rhyme ('zameen')..."..aam nahi".Siyaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09602286491370735800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160481046687220992006-10-10T04:50:00.000-07:002006-10-10T04:50:00.000-07:00Dil pe dard ki likhai thi, so mita di humneBas buj...Dil pe dard ki likhai thi, so mita di humne<BR/><BR/>Bas bujh bujh se gaye lafz, hue tamaam nahi<BR/><BR/>........<BR/><BR/>great work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160419499295028032006-10-09T11:44:00.000-07:002006-10-09T11:44:00.000-07:00Is manzil pe le aaye.n hain aql-o-ishq, ke jahaa.n...Is manzil pe le aaye.n hain aql-o-ishq, ke jahaa.n<BR/>Hosh ka kuch kaam nahi, bekhudi ka ehteraam nahi<BR/>Beautiful lines!!<BR/><BR/>Wow this is ur first attempt! I must say u write with lot of depth. <BR/>Hope to see more coming:)Smritihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00334730772074418353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160401286090378222006-10-09T06:41:00.000-07:002006-10-09T06:41:00.000-07:00hey nice attempt..love to see more of it..hey nice attempt..<BR/>love to see more of it..Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10674430930139483701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160088759966871962006-10-05T15:52:00.000-07:002006-10-05T15:52:00.000-07:00Marhaba....I started..the first couplet...the word...Marhaba....I started..the first couplet...the word 'sulagti' slightly looked unfit...I read on... and by fourth couplet I was getting interested....and the next she'r made me sit up....Chalo is rooh pe ab pairahan ka ilzam nahi....آپنے بہت عمدہ خیال باندھا ہے اور بیحد خوبصورتی کے ساتھ<BR/>You have really done well...keep writing...being in Mumbai you can, if you like, might consult 'talammuz' or just a consultation with a Ustad. I am sure you will go a long way.<BR/>Ghazal ek vahshi sinf-e-shukhan hai aur ek baar giraft meN aa jaye to phir bas mashshaaqi ki zaruurat hai...editorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17073543434209800940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160069243104200652006-10-05T10:27:00.000-07:002006-10-05T10:27:00.000-07:00Hey, this is really good. Congrats on the graduati...Hey, this is really good. Congrats on the graduation to the Ghazal :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28822897.post-1160059267277643122006-10-05T07:41:00.000-07:002006-10-05T07:41:00.000-07:00Beautiful..If its a first attempt of yours, then i...Beautiful..<BR/><BR/>If its a first attempt of yours, then it is really a good one..<BR/><BR/>Keep Inking!!<BR/><BR/>Cheers,<BR/>HPHPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00598035261505894500noreply@blogger.com